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Bittersweet
Bittersweet, baby, bittersweet.
Just the way we are meant to be.
Your strength shielding my defeat.
Your sun melting my snow,
warming it deep and slow,
but never letting go.

Bittersweet, baby, bittersweet.
Just the way it's meant to be.
Your presence forcing my heart to beat.
Your closeness making it easy to breath.
Your eyes shining into mine,
showing me that life can be just fine.

Bittersweet, baby, bittersweet.
A little darkness to appreciate the light.
A little pepper to make the recipe right.
A little loneliness to crave one another.
A little melancholy to keep us together.
A lot "you" to sweet the bitter "me".
A myriad

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for Gaza...don't know how

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I'll do your worry...tonight
I'll feel your sorrow...tonight

just relax and get some sleep
get some rest and leave me to this creep

I'll keep you safe..tonight
I'll make sure everything is all right...

and if your life became a dark street
you will find me beside u in a heart bit

so just let your hand hug mine
let me make your world be just fine

there will always be things to face
and others that you'll just have to chase

the only difference is now I'm here
you won't be alone in such fear...

Sad is what u will never be
Take my hand I'll set you free...

just let me be your ray of light
just let me do your worry tonight....
:(
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tried to write something to make gaza know how sry I really am for letting them down in every way but ended up writting this maybe I'm too optmistic i don't know but the person in this poem is not me maybe my little brother or one of the great muslims who will come one day or maybe any new born baby who will end up being the next 3omr abn el Khatab rAwa or the next salah el din who knows we only have to hope :)

ألا أن نصر الله قريب

tell me if u didn't like it or found it too cliche i won't get sad :)
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~floatingWhiteFalcon Dec 25, 2011
Insha'Allah there will be someone who is able to free us with Allah, jallah wa ta'ala's, help... Like Salah-ad-Din chased the crusaders away... :shakefist:
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~Meecko0o Dec 31, 2011
:) inshaa Allah, may the one to free Palestine by one of our kids, ameen

the green guy is soo cute :D:D
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~floatingWhiteFalcon Jan 1, 2012
Ameen, ja Rab al 'Alamin!

What's about his brother? :shakefish:
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~7argool Aug 12, 2011
very nice, touching.
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~Meecko0o Aug 12, 2011
:aww: thnx, glad you liked it :tighthug:
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~7argool Aug 13, 2011
you're welcome^^
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Mood: Joy ~Kayal97 Aug 11, 2011
Bravo bravo
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~Meecko0o Aug 11, 2011
:blush: thnx
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Mood: Joy ~Kayal97 Aug 12, 2011
your welcome
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